Done Right?

Many of our clients choose to work with us over the site or just to give us a call but your more than welcome to come to our business.

This comes from a website whose slogan reads: "Done right the first time, on time!"
Do you trust them to do it right? I don't. Not when that sentence is smattered with errors and some overall poor syntax.

To fix the basics: Many of our clients choose to work with us over the site or just to give us a call {,} but you{'re} more than welcome to come to our business.

But maybe they should try this: Many of our clients work with us via our website or over the telephone, but you are also welcome to come to our business.

Any other suggestions? Let's compile a list and I will send them to the company.

P.S. This find is compliments of Brea.