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Looks great!!!! I like how you put the horizontal line in the Discussion/Conclusion section!!! It visually breaks up what would otherwise be a busy feeling section.
I think adding the Conclusion to the Abstract block is a more solid way to introduce your research!!! Overall, I think this does an excellent job at succinctly presenting the research; and, hopefully, whetting the appetite of those in attendance to read your research!!!!

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I once had a student who used over 70 exclamation marks in a two page, hand written paper. All I could think was that she was constantly yelling and overly excited about everything. It was over-the-top!!!!!!